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If i have the right group....and if you have a spare moment....could
someone help me to classify this unusual music i put together with
cakewalk....the instruments [x4] are as follows: flute [japanese]
didgereedoo, guitar, and percussion on the guitar....
personally i like it but you might think otherwise....all critique
appreciated....

http://www.loconut.com.au/ShowUsYour...deoSearch.aspx

it is labeled, 'cliffs painted and played too'....

anyone with a moment to spare??

Thanks....brookuschookus
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brookus wrote:
If i have the right group....and if you have a spare moment....could
someone help me to classify this unusual music i put together with
cakewalk....the instruments [x4] are as follows: flute [japanese]
didgereedoo, guitar, and percussion on the guitar....
personally i like it but you might think otherwise....all critique
appreciated....

http://www.loconut.com.au/ShowUsYour...deoSearch.aspx

it is labeled, 'cliffs painted and played too'....

anyone with a moment to spare??

Thanks....brookuschookus

Hmmmmm.....
There's no perceptible time signature (at least not one that links the
instrument parts together), the guitar and flute are playing in
different keys, and the didgereedoo's doing what didgereedoos do.

If the category doesn't already exist, sounds like you've just invented
the "Progressive Ethic" category.

Chris W

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Chris Whealy wrote:
brookus wrote:
If i have the right group....and if you have a spare moment....could
someone help me to classify this unusual music i put together with
cakewalk....the instruments [x4] are as follows: flute [japanese]
didgereedoo, guitar, and percussion on the guitar....
personally i like it but you might think otherwise....all critique
appreciated....

http://www.loconut.com.au/ShowUsYour...deoSearch.aspx

it is labeled, 'cliffs painted and played too'....

anyone with a moment to spare??

Thanks....brookuschookus

Hmmmmm.....
There's no perceptible time signature (at least not one that links the
instrument parts together), the guitar and flute are playing in
different keys, and the didgereedoo's doing what didgereedoos do.

If the category doesn't already exist, sounds like you've just
invented the "Progressive Ethic" category.

Oops, that ought to be "Ethnic"!

:-)

Chris W

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But the words of the wise are quiet and few.
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Chris Whealy wrote:
brookus wrote:
If i have the right group....and if you have a spare moment....could
someone help me to classify this unusual music i put together with
cakewalk....the instruments [x4] are as follows: flute [japanese]
didgereedoo, guitar, and percussion on the guitar....
personally i like it but you might think otherwise....all critique
appreciated....

http://www.loconut.com.au/ShowUsYour...deoSearch.aspx

it is labeled, 'cliffs painted and played too'....

anyone with a moment to spare??

Thanks....brookuschookus

Hmmmmm.....
There's no perceptible time signature (at least not one that links the
instrument parts together), the guitar and flute are playing in
different keys, and the didgereedoo's doing what didgereedoos do.

If the category doesn't already exist, sounds like you've just invented
the "Progressive Ethic" category.

Chris W


But thankfully entirely virtually inaudible.

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On Oct 2, 6:44*pm, Chris Whealy wrote:
Chris Whealy wrote:
brookus wrote:
If i have the right group....and if you have a spare moment....could
someone help me to classify this unusual music i put together with
cakewalk....the instruments [x4] are as follows: flute [japanese]
didgereedoo, guitar, and percussion on the guitar....
personally i like it but you might think otherwise....all critique
appreciated....


http://www.loconut.com.au/ShowUsYour...deoSearch.aspx


it is labeled, 'cliffs painted and played too'....


anyone with a moment to spare??


Thanks....brookuschookus


Hmmmmm.....
There's no perceptible time signature (at least not one that links the
instrument parts together), the guitar and flute are playing in
different keys, and the didgereedoo's doing what didgereedoos do.


If the category doesn't already exist, sounds like you've just
invented the "Progressive Ethic" category.


Oops, that ought to be "Ethnic"!

:-)

Chris W

--
The voice of ignorance speaks loud and long,
But the words of the wise are quiet and few.
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OK. Thanks for your comments! I agree with your comments Chris. I
needed someone with a better ear than i have to tell me...'out of key
and no time signature'. Thanks.
I still like it at least a little bit however [in the same way i like
random sounds recorded and then played back in a barely musical
fashion].
I am not sure if i am being called ignorant or wise....if someone is
calling me ignorant i say just relax....it is only sound and not the
forum for a political and therefore passionate comment like that. i do
not see how wisdom, ignorance and sound can be used linked together in
the same thought....unless sound [music] really evoke your senses.


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On Oct 2, 7:03*pm, Don Pearce wrote:
Chris Whealy wrote:
brookus wrote:
If i have the right group....and if you have a spare moment....could
someone help me to classify this unusual music i put together with
cakewalk....the instruments [x4] are as follows: flute [japanese]
didgereedoo, guitar, and percussion on the guitar....
personally i like it but you might think otherwise....all critique
appreciated....


http://www.loconut.com.au/ShowUsYour...deoSearch.aspx


it is labeled, 'cliffs painted and played too'....


anyone with a moment to spare??


Thanks....brookuschookus


Hmmmmm.....
There's no perceptible time signature (at least not one that links the
instrument parts together), the guitar and flute are playing in
different keys, and the didgereedoo's doing what didgereedoos do.


If the category doesn't already exist, sounds like you've just invented
the "Progressive Ethic" category.


Chris W


But thankfully entirely virtually inaudible.

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Do you mean that you enjoyed not hearing it?
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On Oct 2, 6:44*pm, Chris Whealy wrote:
Chris Whealy wrote:
brookus wrote:
If i have the right group....and if you have a spare moment....could
someone help me to classify this unusual music i put together with
cakewalk....the instruments [x4] are as follows: flute [japanese]
didgereedoo, guitar, and percussion on the guitar....
personally i like it but you might think otherwise....all critique
appreciated....


http://www.loconut.com.au/ShowUsYour...deoSearch.aspx


it is labeled, 'cliffs painted and played too'....


anyone with a moment to spare??


Thanks....brookuschookus


Hmmmmm.....
There's no perceptible time signature (at least not one that links the
instrument parts together), the guitar and flute are playing in
different keys, and the didgereedoo's doing what didgereedoos do.


If the category doesn't already exist, sounds like you've just
invented the "Progressive Ethic" category.


Oops, that ought to be "Ethnic"!

:-)

Chris W

--
The voice of ignorance speaks loud and long,
But the words of the wise are quiet and few.
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Can i ask you Chris if the two sentences starting with, 'the voice...'
are your signature? Or, i amwondering if someone is calling me
ignorant for some reason...? Not that i care altogether but none the
less....i was wondering...
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On Oct 2, 6:44*pm, Chris Whealy wrote:
Chris Whealy wrote:
brookus wrote:
If i have the right group....and if you have a spare moment....could
someone help me to classify this unusual music i put together with
cakewalk....the instruments [x4] are as follows: flute [japanese]
didgereedoo, guitar, and percussion on the guitar....
personally i like it but you might think otherwise....all critique
appreciated....


http://www.loconut.com.au/ShowUsYour...deoSearch.aspx


it is labeled, 'cliffs painted and played too'....


anyone with a moment to spare??


Thanks....brookuschookus


Hmmmmm.....
There's no perceptible time signature (at least not one that links the
instrument parts together), the guitar and flute are playing in
different keys, and the didgereedoo's doing what didgereedoos do.


If the category doesn't already exist, sounds like you've just
invented the "Progressive Ethic" category.


Oops, that ought to be "Ethnic"!

:-)

Chris W

--
The voice of ignorance speaks loud and long,
But the words of the wise are quiet and few.
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Thanks for the comments Chris. Can i ask a question...you may know?
[Q] What is the style created when a person combines random sounds
into a music format ....[am i right to call it industrial fusion if
random factory sounds are recorded and then mixed to create music?]
For the life of me cannot remember what it is called....some folks
have done it....it sounds half random and half purposefully laid
down....
If you can help, or if anyone can help then i say to you gracious....
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On Oct 2, 7:03 pm, Don Pearce wrote:
Chris Whealy wrote:
brookus wrote:
If i have the right group....and if you have a spare moment....could
someone help me to classify this unusual music i put together with
cakewalk....the instruments [x4] are as follows: flute [japanese]
didgereedoo, guitar, and percussion on the guitar....
personally i like it but you might think otherwise....all critique
appreciated....
http://www.loconut.com.au/ShowUsYour...deoSearch.aspx
it is labeled, 'cliffs painted and played too'....
anyone with a moment to spare??
Thanks....brookuschookus
Hmmmmm.....
There's no perceptible time signature (at least not one that links the
instrument parts together), the guitar and flute are playing in
different keys, and the didgereedoo's doing what didgereedoos do.
If the category doesn't already exist, sounds like you've just invented
the "Progressive Ethic" category.
Chris W

But thankfully entirely virtually inaudible.

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Do you mean that you enjoyed not hearing it?


I think Don means to say A) that the playback level was very, very low,
and B) that he didn't like it. He has a point about it being inaudible.
Turn it up so we can hear it.
Personally, I did not think it was all that bad; it just depends on what
you expect from the listener. Fragments of the piece could very well be
used as background music for a play or a documentary; hit chart music it
is not. Neither would I like to sit back and listen to it for the whole
length of the track. For that, it is not interesting enough by far. But
that is not to say it's unusable.

Jos.

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www.ardispark.nl
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On Oct 1, 1:08*pm, brookus wrote:
If i have the right group....and if you have a spare moment....could
someone help me to classify this unusual music i put together with
cakewalk....the instruments [x4] are as follows: flute [japanese]
didgereedoo, guitar, and percussion on the guitar....
personally i like it but you might think otherwise....all critique
appreciated....


"world fusion"?

"campfire/roots"? "grassbilly"?

"low-volume"?

lol it sounds dope anyway.



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Thanks for the comments Chris. Can i ask a question...you may know?
[Q] What is the style created when a person combines random sounds
into a music format ....[am i right to call it industrial fusion if
random factory sounds are recorded and then mixed to create music?]
For the life of me cannot remember what it is called....some folks
have done it....it sounds half random and half purposefully laid
down....
If you can help, or if anyone can help then i say to you gracious....

I can't say I know the exact name of any existing category into which
this piece could be placed.

I think what makes the industrial fusion stuff work is that even though
it appears to be a random collection of industrial sounds, there is in
fact a discernible structure to it. That structure may not fit within
an existing musical convention, but some structure ought to be apparent.

Chris W

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Can i ask you Chris if the two sentences starting with, 'the voice...'
are your signature? Or, i amwondering if someone is calling me
ignorant for some reason...? Not that i care altogether but none the
less....i was wondering...

No, I wasn't making any reference to you. That's just my standard
signature.

Chris W

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brookus wrote:
On Oct 2, 6:44 pm, Chris Whealy wrote:

Chris Whealy wrote:

brookus wrote:

If i have the right group....and if you have a spare moment....could
someone help me to classify this unusual music i put together with
cakewalk....the instruments [x4] are as follows: flute [japanese]
didgereedoo, guitar, and percussion on the guitar....
personally i like it but you might think otherwise....all critique
appreciated....

http://www.loconut.com.au/ShowUsYour...deoSearch.aspx

it is labeled, 'cliffs painted and played too'....

anyone with a moment to spare??

Thanks....brookuschookus

Hmmmmm.....
There's no perceptible time signature (at least not one that links the
instrument parts together), the guitar and flute are playing in
different keys, and the didgereedoo's doing what didgereedoos do.

If the category doesn't already exist, sounds like you've just
invented the "Progressive Ethic" category.

Oops, that ought to be "Ethnic"!

:-)

Chris W

--
The voice of ignorance speaks loud and long,
But the words of the wise are quiet and few.
---- Hide quoted text -

- Show quoted text -


OK. Thanks for your comments! I agree with your comments Chris. I
needed someone with a better ear than i have to tell me...'out of key
and no time signature'. Thanks.
I still like it at least a little bit however [in the same way i like
random sounds recorded and then played back in a barely musical
fashion].
I am not sure if i am being called ignorant or wise....if someone is
calling me ignorant i say just relax....it is only sound and not the
forum for a political and therefore passionate comment like that. i do
not see how wisdom, ignorance and sound can be used linked together in
the same thought....unless sound [music] really evoke your senses.

You seem to think I was taking a swipe at you via my signature. Not
so. That's just my standard sig.

Also, I did not say that the instruments were "out of key". I said they
were playing in "different" keys. There is a big difference between
those two statements. If you say that an instrument is playing "out of
key", then what you're really saying is that the notes it is playing are
out of tune and therefore in error. Playing is a "different key" means
that the notes played by that instrument are perfectly correct, but they
don't blend musically with the notes played by the other instruments. I
was referring to the latter situation.

As for the musicality of the content, you could make the piece easier to
listen to by trying to create some kind or rhythmic coherence between
the different instruments. This is not to say that they must all play
in the same time signature, or that there must be a fixed tempo, but
rather that people tend to appreciate an instrumental composition for
the order and structure they perceive within it. Whether that order and
structure is considered conventional is a different question.

Technically speaking, its under recorded. You should crank the overall
output level up by at least 18dB. I had to turn my volume up to maximum
to hear it clearly.

Chris W

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On Oct 6, 8:14*pm, Chris Whealy wrote:
brookus wrote:
On Oct 2, 6:44 pm, Chris Whealy wrote:


Chris Whealy wrote:


brookus wrote:


If i have the right group....and if you have a spare moment....could
someone help me to classify this unusual music i put together with
cakewalk....the instruments [x4] are as follows: flute [japanese]
didgereedoo, guitar, and percussion on the guitar....
personally i like it but you might think otherwise....all critique
appreciated....


http://www.loconut.com.au/ShowUsYour...deoSearch.aspx


it is labeled, 'cliffs painted and played too'....


anyone with a moment to spare??


Thanks....brookuschookus


Hmmmmm.....
There's no perceptible time signature (at least not one that links the
instrument parts together), the guitar and flute are playing in
different keys, and the didgereedoo's doing what didgereedoos do.


If the category doesn't already exist, sounds like you've just
invented the "Progressive Ethic" category.


Oops, that ought to be "Ethnic"!


:-)


Chris W


--
The voice of ignorance speaks loud and long,
But the words of the wise are quiet and few.
* * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * *---- Hide quoted text -


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OK. *Thanks for your comments! I agree with your comments Chris. I
needed someone with a better ear than i have to tell me...'out of key
and no time signature'. Thanks.
I still like it at least a little bit however [in the same way i like
random sounds recorded and then played back in a barely musical
fashion].
I am not sure if i am being called ignorant or wise....if someone is
calling me ignorant i say just relax....it is only sound and not the
forum for a political and therefore passionate comment like that. i do
not see how wisdom, ignorance and sound can be used linked together in
the same thought....unless sound [music] really evoke your senses.


You seem to think I was taking a swipe at you via my signature. *Not
so. *That's just my standard sig.

Also, I did not say that the instruments were "out of key". *I said they
were playing in "different" keys. *There is a big difference between
those two statements. *If you say that an instrument is playing "out of
key", then what you're really saying is that the notes it is playing are
out of tune and therefore in error. *Playing is a "different key" means
that the notes played by that instrument are perfectly correct, but they
don't blend musically with the notes played by the other instruments. *I
was referring to the latter situation.

As for the musicality of the content, you could make the piece easier to
listen to by trying to create some kind or rhythmic coherence between
the different instruments. *This is not to say that they must all play
in the same time signature, or that there must be a fixed tempo, but
rather that people tend to appreciate an instrumental composition for
the order and structure they perceive within it. *Whether that order and
structure is considered conventional is a different question.

Technically speaking, its under recorded. *You should crank the overall
output level up by at least 18dB. *I had to turn my volume up to maximum
to hear it clearly.

Chris W

--
The voice of ignorance speaks loud and long,
But the words of the wise are quiet and few.
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Thanks for the comments. Now I have some critique to work with and
learn from...Thankyou. [All]. Muchas gracious....
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