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a critique re this cakewalk music ?
If i have the right group....and if you have a spare moment....could
someone help me to classify this unusual music i put together with cakewalk....the instruments [x4] are as follows: flute [japanese] didgereedoo, guitar, and percussion on the guitar.... personally i like it but you might think otherwise....all critique appreciated.... http://www.loconut.com.au/ShowUsYour...deoSearch.aspx it is labeled, 'cliffs painted and played too'.... anyone with a moment to spare?? Thanks....brookuschookus |
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a critique re this cakewalk music ?
brookus wrote:
If i have the right group....and if you have a spare moment....could someone help me to classify this unusual music i put together with cakewalk....the instruments [x4] are as follows: flute [japanese] didgereedoo, guitar, and percussion on the guitar.... personally i like it but you might think otherwise....all critique appreciated.... http://www.loconut.com.au/ShowUsYour...deoSearch.aspx it is labeled, 'cliffs painted and played too'.... anyone with a moment to spare?? Thanks....brookuschookus Hmmmmm..... There's no perceptible time signature (at least not one that links the instrument parts together), the guitar and flute are playing in different keys, and the didgereedoo's doing what didgereedoos do. If the category doesn't already exist, sounds like you've just invented the "Progressive Ethic" category. Chris W -- The voice of ignorance speaks loud and long, But the words of the wise are quiet and few. --- |
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a critique re this cakewalk music ?
Chris Whealy wrote:
brookus wrote: If i have the right group....and if you have a spare moment....could someone help me to classify this unusual music i put together with cakewalk....the instruments [x4] are as follows: flute [japanese] didgereedoo, guitar, and percussion on the guitar.... personally i like it but you might think otherwise....all critique appreciated.... http://www.loconut.com.au/ShowUsYour...deoSearch.aspx it is labeled, 'cliffs painted and played too'.... anyone with a moment to spare?? Thanks....brookuschookus Hmmmmm..... There's no perceptible time signature (at least not one that links the instrument parts together), the guitar and flute are playing in different keys, and the didgereedoo's doing what didgereedoos do. If the category doesn't already exist, sounds like you've just invented the "Progressive Ethic" category. Oops, that ought to be "Ethnic"! :-) Chris W -- The voice of ignorance speaks loud and long, But the words of the wise are quiet and few. --- |
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a critique re this cakewalk music ?
Chris Whealy wrote:
brookus wrote: If i have the right group....and if you have a spare moment....could someone help me to classify this unusual music i put together with cakewalk....the instruments [x4] are as follows: flute [japanese] didgereedoo, guitar, and percussion on the guitar.... personally i like it but you might think otherwise....all critique appreciated.... http://www.loconut.com.au/ShowUsYour...deoSearch.aspx it is labeled, 'cliffs painted and played too'.... anyone with a moment to spare?? Thanks....brookuschookus Hmmmmm..... There's no perceptible time signature (at least not one that links the instrument parts together), the guitar and flute are playing in different keys, and the didgereedoo's doing what didgereedoos do. If the category doesn't already exist, sounds like you've just invented the "Progressive Ethic" category. Chris W But thankfully entirely virtually inaudible. d |
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a critique re this cakewalk music ?
On Oct 2, 6:44*pm, Chris Whealy wrote:
Chris Whealy wrote: brookus wrote: If i have the right group....and if you have a spare moment....could someone help me to classify this unusual music i put together with cakewalk....the instruments [x4] are as follows: flute [japanese] didgereedoo, guitar, and percussion on the guitar.... personally i like it but you might think otherwise....all critique appreciated.... http://www.loconut.com.au/ShowUsYour...deoSearch.aspx it is labeled, 'cliffs painted and played too'.... anyone with a moment to spare?? Thanks....brookuschookus Hmmmmm..... There's no perceptible time signature (at least not one that links the instrument parts together), the guitar and flute are playing in different keys, and the didgereedoo's doing what didgereedoos do. If the category doesn't already exist, sounds like you've just invented the "Progressive Ethic" category. Oops, that ought to be "Ethnic"! :-) Chris W -- The voice of ignorance speaks loud and long, But the words of the wise are quiet and few. * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * *---- Hide quoted text - - Show quoted text - OK. Thanks for your comments! I agree with your comments Chris. I needed someone with a better ear than i have to tell me...'out of key and no time signature'. Thanks. I still like it at least a little bit however [in the same way i like random sounds recorded and then played back in a barely musical fashion]. I am not sure if i am being called ignorant or wise....if someone is calling me ignorant i say just relax....it is only sound and not the forum for a political and therefore passionate comment like that. i do not see how wisdom, ignorance and sound can be used linked together in the same thought....unless sound [music] really evoke your senses. |
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a critique re this cakewalk music ?
On Oct 2, 7:03*pm, Don Pearce wrote:
Chris Whealy wrote: brookus wrote: If i have the right group....and if you have a spare moment....could someone help me to classify this unusual music i put together with cakewalk....the instruments [x4] are as follows: flute [japanese] didgereedoo, guitar, and percussion on the guitar.... personally i like it but you might think otherwise....all critique appreciated.... http://www.loconut.com.au/ShowUsYour...deoSearch.aspx it is labeled, 'cliffs painted and played too'.... anyone with a moment to spare?? Thanks....brookuschookus Hmmmmm..... There's no perceptible time signature (at least not one that links the instrument parts together), the guitar and flute are playing in different keys, and the didgereedoo's doing what didgereedoos do. If the category doesn't already exist, sounds like you've just invented the "Progressive Ethic" category. Chris W But thankfully entirely virtually inaudible. d- Hide quoted text - - Show quoted text - Do you mean that you enjoyed not hearing it? |
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a critique re this cakewalk music ?
On Oct 2, 6:44*pm, Chris Whealy wrote:
Chris Whealy wrote: brookus wrote: If i have the right group....and if you have a spare moment....could someone help me to classify this unusual music i put together with cakewalk....the instruments [x4] are as follows: flute [japanese] didgereedoo, guitar, and percussion on the guitar.... personally i like it but you might think otherwise....all critique appreciated.... http://www.loconut.com.au/ShowUsYour...deoSearch.aspx it is labeled, 'cliffs painted and played too'.... anyone with a moment to spare?? Thanks....brookuschookus Hmmmmm..... There's no perceptible time signature (at least not one that links the instrument parts together), the guitar and flute are playing in different keys, and the didgereedoo's doing what didgereedoos do. If the category doesn't already exist, sounds like you've just invented the "Progressive Ethic" category. Oops, that ought to be "Ethnic"! :-) Chris W -- The voice of ignorance speaks loud and long, But the words of the wise are quiet and few. * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * *---- Hide quoted text - - Show quoted text - Can i ask you Chris if the two sentences starting with, 'the voice...' are your signature? Or, i amwondering if someone is calling me ignorant for some reason...? Not that i care altogether but none the less....i was wondering... |
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a critique re this cakewalk music ?
On Oct 2, 6:44*pm, Chris Whealy wrote:
Chris Whealy wrote: brookus wrote: If i have the right group....and if you have a spare moment....could someone help me to classify this unusual music i put together with cakewalk....the instruments [x4] are as follows: flute [japanese] didgereedoo, guitar, and percussion on the guitar.... personally i like it but you might think otherwise....all critique appreciated.... http://www.loconut.com.au/ShowUsYour...deoSearch.aspx it is labeled, 'cliffs painted and played too'.... anyone with a moment to spare?? Thanks....brookuschookus Hmmmmm..... There's no perceptible time signature (at least not one that links the instrument parts together), the guitar and flute are playing in different keys, and the didgereedoo's doing what didgereedoos do. If the category doesn't already exist, sounds like you've just invented the "Progressive Ethic" category. Oops, that ought to be "Ethnic"! :-) Chris W -- The voice of ignorance speaks loud and long, But the words of the wise are quiet and few. * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * *---- Hide quoted text - - Show quoted text - Thanks for the comments Chris. Can i ask a question...you may know? [Q] What is the style created when a person combines random sounds into a music format ....[am i right to call it industrial fusion if random factory sounds are recorded and then mixed to create music?] For the life of me cannot remember what it is called....some folks have done it....it sounds half random and half purposefully laid down.... If you can help, or if anyone can help then i say to you gracious.... |
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a critique re this cakewalk music ?
brookus schreef:
On Oct 2, 7:03 pm, Don Pearce wrote: Chris Whealy wrote: brookus wrote: If i have the right group....and if you have a spare moment....could someone help me to classify this unusual music i put together with cakewalk....the instruments [x4] are as follows: flute [japanese] didgereedoo, guitar, and percussion on the guitar.... personally i like it but you might think otherwise....all critique appreciated.... http://www.loconut.com.au/ShowUsYour...deoSearch.aspx it is labeled, 'cliffs painted and played too'.... anyone with a moment to spare?? Thanks....brookuschookus Hmmmmm..... There's no perceptible time signature (at least not one that links the instrument parts together), the guitar and flute are playing in different keys, and the didgereedoo's doing what didgereedoos do. If the category doesn't already exist, sounds like you've just invented the "Progressive Ethic" category. Chris W But thankfully entirely virtually inaudible. d- Hide quoted text - - Show quoted text - Do you mean that you enjoyed not hearing it? I think Don means to say A) that the playback level was very, very low, and B) that he didn't like it. He has a point about it being inaudible. Turn it up so we can hear it. Personally, I did not think it was all that bad; it just depends on what you expect from the listener. Fragments of the piece could very well be used as background music for a play or a documentary; hit chart music it is not. Neither would I like to sit back and listen to it for the whole length of the track. For that, it is not interesting enough by far. But that is not to say it's unusable. Jos. -- Ardis Park Music www.ardispark.nl |
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a critique re this cakewalk music ?
On Oct 1, 1:08*pm, brookus wrote:
If i have the right group....and if you have a spare moment....could someone help me to classify this unusual music i put together with cakewalk....the instruments [x4] are as follows: flute [japanese] didgereedoo, guitar, and percussion on the guitar.... personally i like it but you might think otherwise....all critique appreciated.... "world fusion"? "campfire/roots"? "grassbilly"? "low-volume"? lol it sounds dope anyway. |
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a critique re this cakewalk music ?
brookus wrote:
On Oct 2, 6:44 pm, Chris Whealy wrote: Thanks for the comments Chris. Can i ask a question...you may know? [Q] What is the style created when a person combines random sounds into a music format ....[am i right to call it industrial fusion if random factory sounds are recorded and then mixed to create music?] For the life of me cannot remember what it is called....some folks have done it....it sounds half random and half purposefully laid down.... If you can help, or if anyone can help then i say to you gracious.... I can't say I know the exact name of any existing category into which this piece could be placed. I think what makes the industrial fusion stuff work is that even though it appears to be a random collection of industrial sounds, there is in fact a discernible structure to it. That structure may not fit within an existing musical convention, but some structure ought to be apparent. Chris W -- The voice of ignorance speaks loud and long, But the words of the wise are quiet and few. --- |
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a critique re this cakewalk music ?
brookus wrote:
On Oct 2, 6:44 pm, Chris Whealy wrote: Can i ask you Chris if the two sentences starting with, 'the voice...' are your signature? Or, i amwondering if someone is calling me ignorant for some reason...? Not that i care altogether but none the less....i was wondering... No, I wasn't making any reference to you. That's just my standard signature. Chris W -- The voice of ignorance speaks loud and long, But the words of the wise are quiet and few. --- |
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a critique re this cakewalk music ?
brookus wrote:
On Oct 2, 6:44 pm, Chris Whealy wrote: Chris Whealy wrote: brookus wrote: If i have the right group....and if you have a spare moment....could someone help me to classify this unusual music i put together with cakewalk....the instruments [x4] are as follows: flute [japanese] didgereedoo, guitar, and percussion on the guitar.... personally i like it but you might think otherwise....all critique appreciated.... http://www.loconut.com.au/ShowUsYour...deoSearch.aspx it is labeled, 'cliffs painted and played too'.... anyone with a moment to spare?? Thanks....brookuschookus Hmmmmm..... There's no perceptible time signature (at least not one that links the instrument parts together), the guitar and flute are playing in different keys, and the didgereedoo's doing what didgereedoos do. If the category doesn't already exist, sounds like you've just invented the "Progressive Ethic" category. Oops, that ought to be "Ethnic"! :-) Chris W -- The voice of ignorance speaks loud and long, But the words of the wise are quiet and few. ---- Hide quoted text - - Show quoted text - OK. Thanks for your comments! I agree with your comments Chris. I needed someone with a better ear than i have to tell me...'out of key and no time signature'. Thanks. I still like it at least a little bit however [in the same way i like random sounds recorded and then played back in a barely musical fashion]. I am not sure if i am being called ignorant or wise....if someone is calling me ignorant i say just relax....it is only sound and not the forum for a political and therefore passionate comment like that. i do not see how wisdom, ignorance and sound can be used linked together in the same thought....unless sound [music] really evoke your senses. You seem to think I was taking a swipe at you via my signature. Not so. That's just my standard sig. Also, I did not say that the instruments were "out of key". I said they were playing in "different" keys. There is a big difference between those two statements. If you say that an instrument is playing "out of key", then what you're really saying is that the notes it is playing are out of tune and therefore in error. Playing is a "different key" means that the notes played by that instrument are perfectly correct, but they don't blend musically with the notes played by the other instruments. I was referring to the latter situation. As for the musicality of the content, you could make the piece easier to listen to by trying to create some kind or rhythmic coherence between the different instruments. This is not to say that they must all play in the same time signature, or that there must be a fixed tempo, but rather that people tend to appreciate an instrumental composition for the order and structure they perceive within it. Whether that order and structure is considered conventional is a different question. Technically speaking, its under recorded. You should crank the overall output level up by at least 18dB. I had to turn my volume up to maximum to hear it clearly. Chris W -- The voice of ignorance speaks loud and long, But the words of the wise are quiet and few. --- |
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a critique re this cakewalk music ?
On Oct 6, 8:14*pm, Chris Whealy wrote:
brookus wrote: On Oct 2, 6:44 pm, Chris Whealy wrote: Chris Whealy wrote: brookus wrote: If i have the right group....and if you have a spare moment....could someone help me to classify this unusual music i put together with cakewalk....the instruments [x4] are as follows: flute [japanese] didgereedoo, guitar, and percussion on the guitar.... personally i like it but you might think otherwise....all critique appreciated.... http://www.loconut.com.au/ShowUsYour...deoSearch.aspx it is labeled, 'cliffs painted and played too'.... anyone with a moment to spare?? Thanks....brookuschookus Hmmmmm..... There's no perceptible time signature (at least not one that links the instrument parts together), the guitar and flute are playing in different keys, and the didgereedoo's doing what didgereedoos do. If the category doesn't already exist, sounds like you've just invented the "Progressive Ethic" category. Oops, that ought to be "Ethnic"! :-) Chris W -- The voice of ignorance speaks loud and long, But the words of the wise are quiet and few. * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * *---- Hide quoted text - - Show quoted text - OK. *Thanks for your comments! I agree with your comments Chris. I needed someone with a better ear than i have to tell me...'out of key and no time signature'. Thanks. I still like it at least a little bit however [in the same way i like random sounds recorded and then played back in a barely musical fashion]. I am not sure if i am being called ignorant or wise....if someone is calling me ignorant i say just relax....it is only sound and not the forum for a political and therefore passionate comment like that. i do not see how wisdom, ignorance and sound can be used linked together in the same thought....unless sound [music] really evoke your senses. You seem to think I was taking a swipe at you via my signature. *Not so. *That's just my standard sig. Also, I did not say that the instruments were "out of key". *I said they were playing in "different" keys. *There is a big difference between those two statements. *If you say that an instrument is playing "out of key", then what you're really saying is that the notes it is playing are out of tune and therefore in error. *Playing is a "different key" means that the notes played by that instrument are perfectly correct, but they don't blend musically with the notes played by the other instruments. *I was referring to the latter situation. As for the musicality of the content, you could make the piece easier to listen to by trying to create some kind or rhythmic coherence between the different instruments. *This is not to say that they must all play in the same time signature, or that there must be a fixed tempo, but rather that people tend to appreciate an instrumental composition for the order and structure they perceive within it. *Whether that order and structure is considered conventional is a different question. Technically speaking, its under recorded. *You should crank the overall output level up by at least 18dB. *I had to turn my volume up to maximum to hear it clearly. Chris W -- The voice of ignorance speaks loud and long, But the words of the wise are quiet and few. * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * *---- Hide quoted text - - Show quoted text - Thanks for the comments. Now I have some critique to work with and learn from...Thankyou. [All]. Muchas gracious.... |
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